Of course, Walkingeagle. It is YOUR story, and whatever you consider is needed, that will be the best. I'm not writing this wanting you to change your plans in any way. I would like to try and say
why I like how you wrote it.
I think that your hunt chronicle
is simply perfect as written! If you knew me, you would realize how unusual my assessment is because I'm an
overboard perfectionist when it comes to details....numbers, grammar, spelling, punctuation, etc. My perfectionism is quite out of control.
Wonder if I can explain why I think your hunt chronicle is perfect?
I'll try for the why.
What you wrote is vividly "alive" with the experience and emotions of the hunt, and your living of those exciting days moment-by-moment. You brought you into this tale. And the ability to bring others into the tale in the same way is what is so astonishing and beautiful. I found it hard to believe when you said you had never written anything like this before. You have a gift that comes along only once in a lifetime...I would like to handle "pen & paper" as you do.
Thanks for allowing me to share during your chronicle.
wiksmo